Classier than Elvis on Velvet ([info]ranalore) wrote in [info]fuda_100,
2005-02-14 18:50:00

Axiomatic

Betaed by elizacakeEliza, who also provided the title.

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Axiomatic
by Rana Eros

Terazuma buys Wakaba new hair ribbons when he notices the old ones are fraying. Wakaba always brings enough lunch for two. Saya buys two of a new outfit, and lets Yuma borrow one permanently. Yuma leaves a pair of shoes at Saya's until Saya forgets they're not hers.

Tsuzuki makes fuda while Hisoka fills out forms. They trade stacks of paper before lunch. Every morning, Watari gives Tatsumi a cup of tea or coffee, so he knows which not to touch. There is always just enough money for new lab equipment.

Love is not a word spoken in Meifu.

Nonetheless.

END

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[info]b_hallward

February 14 2005, 19:02:45 UTC 7 years ago

Your tone here is perfect. And I really like how you keep the actions small and simple, but so telling.

[info]ranalore

February 14 2005, 20:07:34 UTC 7 years ago

Thank you. I wanted understated, so I tried to keep things quiet and small.

[info]gaudior

7 years ago

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[info]ranalore

7 years ago

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[info]wordsofastory

February 14 2005, 19:05:09 UTC 7 years ago

Oh, man. Big, big love for this.

[info]ranalore

February 14 2005, 20:08:31 UTC 7 years ago

Thanks! *G*

[info]threewalls

February 14 2005, 19:23:48 UTC 7 years ago

That's so sweet.

[info]ranalore

February 14 2005, 20:08:54 UTC 7 years ago

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. *G*

[info]questionable537

February 14 2005, 19:25:42 UTC 7 years ago

That was adorable. I love it!

[info]ranalore

February 14 2005, 20:09:14 UTC 7 years ago

Thanks!

[info]kohakutenshi

February 14 2005, 19:26:34 UTC 7 years ago

*Gasp!* *Shock!* *OMG!*

I LOVE IT. XD

[info]ranalore

February 14 2005, 20:10:05 UTC 7 years ago

*gasp*

NO WAY! You never like my stuff! ;-)

Thank you!

[info]honooko

February 14 2005, 19:32:00 UTC 7 years ago

You are my new hero. I just LOVE this; all the little things that add up to mean so much more. It's incredibly sweet.

*favorites*

[info]ranalore

February 14 2005, 20:11:26 UTC 7 years ago

Wow, thank you! I am so very, very pleased you liked it so much.

[info]innocentwater

February 14 2005, 19:33:22 UTC 7 years ago

Aww! *snuggle* It's so snuggly. Your fic is internet textual plushiness.

[info]ranalore

February 14 2005, 20:13:29 UTC 7 years ago

Internet textual plushiness, hmm? Sounds kinky. ;-)

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

[info]sakanagi

February 14 2005, 20:19:20 UTC 7 years ago

Whoah. Very nice drabble. ^^

[info]ranalore

February 14 2005, 20:22:53 UTC 7 years ago

Thank you. *G*

[info]syonakeleste

February 14 2005, 20:45:59 UTC 7 years ago

^_^

::adds to memories::

[info]ranalore

February 14 2005, 20:54:37 UTC 7 years ago

I am very flattered, thank you!

[info]okaasan

February 14 2005, 20:54:05 UTC 7 years ago

This was beautifully done! Good job!

[info]ranalore

February 14 2005, 20:57:27 UTC 7 years ago

Thank you!

[info]swivelchair

February 14 2005, 21:07:32 UTC 7 years ago

Oooh, this was beautiful! Such little actions that mean so much..*sparkles* ♥ I love you for this. It's absolutely gorgeous.

[info]ranalore

February 14 2005, 21:11:03 UTC 7 years ago

Thank you! I'm so, so pleased you liked it.

[info]signy1

February 14 2005, 21:19:25 UTC 7 years ago

Every once in a while, a piece comes along that reminds me exactly why I love fanfic so much. This was one of them. Thanks.

[info]ranalore

February 14 2005, 21:28:54 UTC 7 years ago

That is high praise indeed. Thank you!

[info]wolfpilot06

February 14 2005, 21:47:18 UTC 7 years ago

Beautiful in its simplicity. This adds up to a whole lotta love. ^_^

*cheers and applauds*

**Wolf**

[info]ranalore

February 14 2005, 22:24:55 UTC 7 years ago

Thank you! *G*

Speaking of love, that icon just cracks me up.

[info]quinesale

February 15 2005, 00:50:55 UTC 7 years ago

This is so wonderful, very lovely!

[info]ranalore

February 15 2005, 17:42:19 UTC 7 years ago

Thank you!

[info]arete

February 15 2005, 01:15:02 UTC 7 years ago

ribbons, lunch, dresses, shoes, paperwork, and tea...

Yeah, that has to be YnM! So sweet... What I like best is that all of them revolve around the people noticing what the other likes. Sometimes that is so hard to do, but when done, is the best gift of all.

[info]ranalore

February 15 2005, 17:44:24 UTC 7 years ago

Thank you! Yeah, what I wanted was to show people were paying attention. I'm glad that came through.

[info]weirdquark

February 15 2005, 08:08:11 UTC 7 years ago

Nice. :) I like all the little things people do when there is love.

[info]ranalore

February 15 2005, 17:48:44 UTC 7 years ago

Me too, which is exactly what I wanted to show. Thanks!

[info]kessie

February 15 2005, 09:11:31 UTC 7 years ago

Oh, that was perfect.

Adds to memroies; ♥

[info]ranalore

February 15 2005, 17:50:41 UTC 7 years ago

Wow, thank you! I'm so, so flattered.

[info]rachelmanija

February 15 2005, 16:48:35 UTC 7 years ago

Aww! That's so, so sweet.

[info]ranalore

February 15 2005, 18:56:23 UTC 7 years ago

Thank you!

[info]jtriskell

February 16 2005, 10:33:22 UTC 7 years ago

a well-rounded, gorgeous piece. Made me smile, thanks for sharing

[info]ranalore

February 16 2005, 15:04:54 UTC 7 years ago

Thank you for letting me know how much you liked it!

[info]cyne_dias

February 17 2005, 13:18:53 UTC 7 years ago

I love how the litle details are actually the focus here. So simple, but poignant. *loves*

[info]ranalore

February 17 2005, 21:12:12 UTC 7 years ago

Thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

[info]kashuarashi

February 17 2005, 22:02:28 UTC 7 years ago

Absolutely fucking BRILLIANT! I ADORE it!

[info]ranalore

February 17 2005, 22:06:20 UTC 7 years ago

Thank you! You even used caps, I'm flattered! *G*

[info]kashuarashi

7 years ago

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[info]etrangere

April 2 2005, 10:39:04 UTC 7 years ago

wow. perfect.

[info]ranalore

April 3 2005, 20:38:22 UTC 7 years ago

Thank you. *G*

[info]elihice

April 2 2005, 19:18:21 UTC 7 years ago

Perfect. I loved this drabble.

[info]ranalore

April 3 2005, 20:39:19 UTC 7 years ago

Thank you so much! Out of curiosity, did someone rec it or something? You're the second person to comment on it in the past few days, and given how long ago I posted it, I just wondered if someone linked it.

[info]elihice

7 years ago

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[info]ranalore

7 years ago

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