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Axiomatic 
14th-Feb-2005 06:50 pm
rana name
Betaed by elizacakeEliza, who also provided the title.

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Axiomatic
by Rana Eros

Terazuma buys Wakaba new hair ribbons when he notices the old ones are fraying. Wakaba always brings enough lunch for two. Saya buys two of a new outfit, and lets Yuma borrow one permanently. Yuma leaves a pair of shoes at Saya's until Saya forgets they're not hers.

Tsuzuki makes fuda while Hisoka fills out forms. They trade stacks of paper before lunch. Every morning, Watari gives Tatsumi a cup of tea or coffee, so he knows which not to touch. There is always just enough money for new lab equipment.

Love is not a word spoken in Meifu.

Nonetheless.

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Comments 
14th-Feb-2005 07:02 pm (UTC)
Your tone here is perfect. And I really like how you keep the actions small and simple, but so telling.
14th-Feb-2005 08:07 pm (UTC)
Thank you. I wanted understated, so I tried to keep things quiet and small.
14th-Feb-2005 07:05 pm (UTC)
Oh, man. Big, big love for this.
14th-Feb-2005 08:08 pm (UTC)
Thanks! *G*
14th-Feb-2005 07:23 pm (UTC)
That's so sweet.
14th-Feb-2005 08:08 pm (UTC)
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. *G*
14th-Feb-2005 07:25 pm (UTC)
That was adorable. I love it!
14th-Feb-2005 08:09 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
14th-Feb-2005 07:26 pm (UTC)
*Gasp!* *Shock!* *OMG!*

I LOVE IT. XD
14th-Feb-2005 08:10 pm (UTC)
*gasp*

NO WAY! You never like my stuff! ;-)

Thank you!
14th-Feb-2005 07:32 pm (UTC)
You are my new hero. I just LOVE this; all the little things that add up to mean so much more. It's incredibly sweet.

*favorites*
14th-Feb-2005 08:11 pm (UTC)
Wow, thank you! I am so very, very pleased you liked it so much.
14th-Feb-2005 07:33 pm (UTC)
Aww! *snuggle* It's so snuggly. Your fic is internet textual plushiness.
14th-Feb-2005 08:13 pm (UTC)
Internet textual plushiness, hmm? Sounds kinky. ;-)

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
14th-Feb-2005 08:19 pm (UTC)
Whoah. Very nice drabble. ^^
14th-Feb-2005 08:22 pm (UTC)
Thank you. *G*
14th-Feb-2005 08:45 pm (UTC)
^_^

::adds to memories::
14th-Feb-2005 08:54 pm (UTC)
I am very flattered, thank you!
14th-Feb-2005 08:54 pm (UTC)
This was beautifully done! Good job!
14th-Feb-2005 08:57 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
14th-Feb-2005 09:07 pm (UTC)
Oooh, this was beautiful! Such little actions that mean so much..*sparkles* ♥ I love you for this. It's absolutely gorgeous.
14th-Feb-2005 09:11 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I'm so, so pleased you liked it.
14th-Feb-2005 09:19 pm (UTC)
Every once in a while, a piece comes along that reminds me exactly why I love fanfic so much. This was one of them. Thanks.
14th-Feb-2005 09:28 pm (UTC)
That is high praise indeed. Thank you!
14th-Feb-2005 09:47 pm (UTC)
Beautiful in its simplicity. This adds up to a whole lotta love. ^_^

*cheers and applauds*

**Wolf**
14th-Feb-2005 10:24 pm (UTC)
Thank you! *G*

Speaking of love, that icon just cracks me up.
15th-Feb-2005 12:50 am (UTC)
This is so wonderful, very lovely!
15th-Feb-2005 05:42 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
15th-Feb-2005 01:15 am (UTC)
ribbons, lunch, dresses, shoes, paperwork, and tea...

Yeah, that has to be YnM! So sweet... What I like best is that all of them revolve around the people noticing what the other likes. Sometimes that is so hard to do, but when done, is the best gift of all.
15th-Feb-2005 05:44 pm (UTC)
Thank you! Yeah, what I wanted was to show people were paying attention. I'm glad that came through.
15th-Feb-2005 08:08 am (UTC)
Nice. :) I like all the little things people do when there is love.
15th-Feb-2005 05:48 pm (UTC)
Me too, which is exactly what I wanted to show. Thanks!
15th-Feb-2005 09:11 am (UTC)
Oh, that was perfect.

Adds to memroies; ♥

15th-Feb-2005 05:50 pm (UTC)
Wow, thank you! I'm so, so flattered.
15th-Feb-2005 04:48 pm (UTC)
Aww! That's so, so sweet.
15th-Feb-2005 06:56 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
16th-Feb-2005 10:33 am (UTC)
a well-rounded, gorgeous piece. Made me smile, thanks for sharing
16th-Feb-2005 03:04 pm (UTC)
Thank you for letting me know how much you liked it!
17th-Feb-2005 01:18 pm (UTC)
I love how the litle details are actually the focus here. So simple, but poignant. *loves*
17th-Feb-2005 09:12 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed it.
17th-Feb-2005 10:02 pm (UTC)
Absolutely fucking BRILLIANT! I ADORE it!
17th-Feb-2005 10:06 pm (UTC)
Thank you! You even used caps, I'm flattered! *G*
2nd-Apr-2005 10:39 am (UTC)
wow. perfect.
3rd-Apr-2005 08:38 pm (UTC)
Thank you. *G*
2nd-Apr-2005 07:18 pm (UTC)
Perfect. I loved this drabble.
3rd-Apr-2005 08:39 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! Out of curiosity, did someone rec it or something? You're the second person to comment on it in the past few days, and given how long ago I posted it, I just wondered if someone linked it.
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